it started out good

it was good till you chage the pattern half way into it just made it blaa

nice job

Nice job like i said in my last review i liked the high notes and like i told you "you need to put some low stuff in to make it more =" i also see that you use the same pattern for the low notes that where on the high and you put it in more of the song then just the parts with the high notes. you have a lot better of transfers from part to part then the last on not so choppy. if your going to loop it you should add the begging notes to the end of the song to help the transfer to the begging after then end that why i only gave you a 9 in stars i know you can add more you should add something building of the high sounds like a slid up there and then back down to make it sound more like a space journey with ups and downs you do well with that at first but then you kinda lose it at the end.
DO SOME MORE WORK AND RE POST and maybe you will get that 10 lol
*in DotZ we trust*

ahhh

way to much rythm stop it